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Posted by: Reflaxion Feb 19 2003, 12:26 AM
As a common bond
Piro uses Kotone
to impress the girl

Posted by: d34d_d4r1n Feb 19 2003, 12:33 AM
erika told me
all men are simply fanboys
i guess she was right

in spite of myself
i cannot not express this
warmth i feel inside

Posted by: Caduceuskun Feb 19 2003, 12:38 AM
A cold girl of grey
In a world of white on white
The poor dear shivers

Too shocked to finish
All the questions in her mind;
How did he know this?

He's looking forward
And strange coincidences
Brought him to her voice



Posted by: Rowan Bristol Feb 19 2003, 12:54 AM
But how could you know?
They only just revealed
the sad girl in snow.

I have dreamed of you,
In ways that you will never guess.
my sad girl in snow.

Posted by: d34d_d4r1n Feb 19 2003, 01:04 AM
she looks too lonely
embracing herself tightly
under icy snow

this wintry cold heart
needs more than i can muster
to spark affection

Posted by: Shoka Feb 19 2003, 01:08 AM
one fragile moment
of unalloyed happiness,
like silent snowfall.

[irish_haiku]
Here's Piro, delighted to know
That this girl, who is named Kimiko,
Will be playing the lonely
Kanazuki Kotone,
The beautiful sad girl in snow.
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: ArchangelZ Feb 19 2003, 02:13 AM
sad girl in the snow
but how could he ever know
shows my inner pain

sad girl in the snow
she may never really know
longing to warm her

sad girl in the snow
what will your voice show the world
your pain or your light...

Posted by: Reiko Feb 19 2003, 08:56 AM
Kimiko no reaction:

kind, charming gaijin?
scary, obsessive fanboy?
feeling mostly grey

Posted by: AncestralHamster Feb 19 2003, 09:01 PM
In reply to:

I have dreamed of you,
In ways that you will never guess.
my sad girl in snow.


In daylight dreams fade
like snow melts in the springtime.
Kimiko is real.

He praises Kotone,
not Kimiko. Fool Piro
inserts foot in mouth.

Posted by: edofthewired Feb 19 2003, 09:20 PM
thoose poems rock!!!

Posted by: AncestralHamster Feb 19 2003, 10:28 PM
[haiku]
I'm not if sure you mean my haiku specifically or the haiku thread in general, but in either case, thank you. [/haiku]

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