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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [370] DPD-Kimiko

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Feb 7 2003, 03:29 AM
And so I'm searching
for mystery, magic
while hiding my soul.

Posted by: Phaedrus Feb 7 2003, 04:48 AM
Hiding her beauty,
pretending she has no wings.
Some day, she will fly.

Posted by: K4w411 N3k0 Feb 7 2003, 10:24 AM
Lost in her sorrow
Wishing to be whole again
But is too hallow

00H="Out of Haiku" - I have a series of haiku linked together like how I sometimes do things, but I don't have them with me now. I'll post that later.

Posted by: CruciformPuppy Feb 7 2003, 11:28 AM
Ah, Dead Piro Days
I love them so very much
Despite no story

Kimiko has wings,
She looks as good as ever.
Beautiful girl.

Posted by: TheYamiKitsune Feb 7 2003, 11:57 AM
The wings of my soul
Can't be seen by mortal eyes
But I know it's there

Posted by: Kattana Feb 7 2003, 12:02 PM
Wings cliped by fear,
stunning beauty unable
to take flight, so sad.

Posted by: Caduceuskun Feb 7 2003, 03:00 PM
Naught but a shawl guards
The vulnerable angel
Bared to the world

A dream brought to life
Unexpected problems
Revealing one's self

Posted by: Shoka Feb 7 2003, 03:20 PM
No Room for Wings

I have no room for wings in this grey space.
A rubbish-littered alley darkly goes
Between two dingy walls, and wistful ghosts
Of slowly fading dreams dwell in this place.
Stark hieroglyphs of rust have streaked the face
Of soot-stained brick, held fast by iron bolts,
In words that trace illegibly my hopes -
They cannot long survive this shuttered waste.

Above the narrow walls I've tried to climb
So many times, and suffered many falls,
There gleams the golden ribbon of the sky.
Could I escape this prison of my mind,
Forego the chilly comfort of these walls,
And reach the top, I think that I could fly.

Posted by: seyosama Feb 7 2003, 06:04 PM
To be an angel,
Is to take wing and fly.
So, angels walk too?

Tenshi koto:
Tonde, Waratte... mo --
Aruite mo?

/From the tunnel's stony womb/the carriage rides to meet the groom/and opens wide with welcome doors/but he hesitates -- then withdraws -- deeper in the shadows...!/

Posted by: ArchangelZ Feb 7 2003, 06:40 PM
gentle eternity
in her soul, neverending
gentle love at heart....

Posted by: AncestralHamster Feb 7 2003, 07:31 PM
Wings bound for safety.
Only through risks can you soar.
Take flight, shy angel!

[Haiku] Nice sonnet, Shoka. [/Haiku]

Posted by: solo1 Feb 7 2003, 08:46 PM
wow so you guys are in story discutions doing shot poems of a booty-full angel like girl

Posted by: K4w411 N3k0 Feb 7 2003, 09:18 PM
OOH I still don't have what I truely wish to post since my creative writing teach collected our journals today and I wrote in there but I'll write another short for now.

Angel confined by
Her own fear to take to sky
Leaves her in the grey

Posted by: BlckKnght Feb 7 2003, 09:37 PM
Shy, sad Kimiko
Exposed to our cold eyes.
We want you to fly.

Posted by: Yggdrasil Feb 7 2003, 10:34 PM
Standing alone, bared
Shawl covers, obscuring wings
Wintry face betrays

Posted by: K4w411 N3k0 Feb 10 2003, 10:25 AM
Alright, got my jornal back so this is what I wished to post ealier but could not. Sorry for being late, but I thought it worthy of it's addition to the thread.

An insecure one
hindering her own flight now
Wondering in doubt

Sad with tears in eye
That don't quite fall from that place
Walloing in sorrow

An angel fallen
From former fame to despair
Once radiant dulled

Filled with only pain
Of the unsettling past
Which lies beyond reach

A platinum star
Fadig to a lossing light
Lost ia a grey sea

In search of all lost
But never willing to go far
As she is hallow

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