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Posted by: Reflaxion Jan 22 2003, 10:37 AM
harsh embarrassment
totally consumes her mind
leading to silence

Posted by: smurd Jan 22 2003, 10:43 AM
"No no! that's not it!
I don't not like you at all!"
Now she's all confused.

Now Piro wonders:
Does she scald the ones she loves?
At least she noticed...

Walking back after the day's ordeal,
Piro's wondering, "How does she feel?
Does a flung coffeepot
Mean she likes me, or not?
Am I schlemozl to her schlemiel?"

Posted by: Caduceuskun Jan 22 2003, 12:17 PM
I never had known
Using a bottle that way
Could make a "punt" sound.

Realization dawns
They've met many times without
Knowing; clearly fate

[irish haiku]
She gives introductions to new levels of pain
Scalded laps and hard blows to the brain
But with seiyuu repute
(Not to mention she's cute)
I'm thinking he ought not complain.
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: Phaedrus Jan 22 2003, 04:43 PM
In reply to:

"No no! that's not it!
I don't not like you at all!"
Now she's all confused.

Dew-speckled lily;
paint would add no more beauty.
Just look on in awe.

Yet you missed the last
zen-like Kimikoism:
"I huh."

Posted by: smurd Jan 22 2003, 05:41 PM

Truly art thou right:
Haste makes waste, from bad to verse.
I am off my game.

Posted by: Shoka Jan 23 2003, 12:38 AM
hangdog expressions
illustrate their shared subtext:
"what is wrong with me?"

Sononda's been roundly abused
With a bottle feloniously used
By that turtle-from-hell
In its mecha-proofed shell;
So now what's the Inspector to do?

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jan 23 2003, 01:17 AM
Righteous bust time.
Excessive force? Not enough.
Sound of mech crashing.

Her feelings revealed:
"I don't not like you at all!!"
Sound of hearts racing.

These haikus sponsored by the Basho Abuse Society.

Posted by: Opt498 Jan 23 2003, 01:20 AM
This precious moment
Cannot possibly endure...
What will ruin it all?

Posted by: Garran Jan 23 2003, 01:24 AM
So much of me has
Passed through your face now, it seems
Filtered like coffee


This was to be much longer
Another epic

But, frustrated, I
Found only this piece of what
I wanted to say)

Posted by: DemonMiko Jan 23 2003, 11:35 PM
Gameru, the shamed
does he fight for his honor
or is he just drunk?

Deadly Kimiko
Piro realizes that he
may need some armor.

Yet she, so precious,
apologizes for the
coffee bath, both times.

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