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Posted by: Kinda_Mayvelle Apr 23 2008, 12:46 PM
He didn't like it,
It was too deep; but it was
My favorite part.

I couldn't resist. laugh.gif

Posted by: Tangent Apr 23 2008, 12:59 PM
Too many syllables for the last line.

Might work better as "My favorite part."

Posted by: Kinda_Mayvelle Apr 23 2008, 02:53 PM
Really? I'll fix it then. happy.gif

Posted by: mistersaxon Apr 23 2008, 03:24 PM
He didn't like it,
But mainly 'cos Moe-Bo
wears such tiny skirts. wub.gif

Whereas Moeko
usually wore jump-suits
zipped up to the neck. sad.gif

Poor Piro! His past laid bare
and his fetishes exposed.

smile.gif smile.gif smile.gif

Posted by: Kinda_Mayvelle Apr 23 2008, 05:49 PM
Nice. XD

Posted by: shadowinthelight Apr 23 2008, 06:04 PM
Queen of undead tells
how Piro watched girly shows.
He is not amused. mad.gif

edit: a couple more

The four together
But wait, now there is a fifth
Will she stay with them?

Miho looks sleepy
Maybe she could use a nap
Where's the closest bed?

Posted by: wordwarrior Apr 24 2008, 01:34 AM
QUOTE (shadowinthelight @ Apr 23 2008, 06:04 PM)
Miho looks sleepy
Maybe she could use a nap
Where's the closest casket?

Talk about not being able to resist fixin'.

Posted by: Teddy-Werebear Apr 24 2008, 11:38 AM
SHUT UP! SHUT UP! You...
Your malevolence disgusts!
Fester in silence!

Posted by: Kinda_Mayvelle Apr 24 2008, 11:55 AM
Pure Teddy there. laugh.gif

Posted by: Tangent Apr 24 2008, 12:33 PM
Teddy Werebear wails
Dismay'd at Tohya's fandom
His secret desire?

Posted by: valvehead Apr 24 2008, 01:11 PM
Tangent kills catgirls
Soon he will suffer badly
From a swarm of claws

NYOW! FFFFT! tongue.gif

Posted by: Tangent Apr 24 2008, 01:29 PM
What you don't realize
Is that kittens have claws too;
I've been swarmed before. happy.gif

Posted by: Teddy-Werebear Apr 24 2008, 03:14 PM
I desire her death...
or the end to her undeath,
as the case may be.


Killing catgirls good...
messing with Teddy-Werebear...
gets Tangent trouble!

Posted by: Tangent Apr 24 2008, 03:38 PM
I'd drop the "big" from the last line, TW. That gets it to 5 syllables. happy.gif

Note, I didn't say what your "secret desire" was. Hmm. guilty conscience, my fuzzy friend? =^-^=

Posted by: Teddy-Werebear Apr 24 2008, 04:44 PM
Teddy's heart is pure
His conscience clear of taint
Miho holds no sway

Posted by: Kinda_Mayvelle Apr 24 2008, 05:50 PM
Hah, that sounds like some kind of ritualistic cleansing chant. laugh.gif

Posted by: BinaryTears Apr 27 2008, 02:31 AM
She is the evil!
Teddy must be vigilant.
His gaze never drifts.

Chanting his resolve
There is no doubt in his heart!
Perhaps a little?

Tohya turns and smiles.
Mischievous wink at Teddy.
"Such a cuddly Bear."

His dilemma there
Is amusing and unique.
Who else would dither?

Posted by: Teddy-Werebear Apr 27 2008, 04:58 PM
Wink all that you want,
vile soul sucking dark creature,
I will not fall prey!

Posted by: Tangent Apr 27 2008, 07:00 PM
Teddy Werebear claims
He will not fall prey to cute
Kittens ribbon'd him.

Posted by: rabidcentipede Apr 27 2008, 07:14 PM
Teddy must not lie...
Miho is so darkly cute.
Can his heart be swayed?

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