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|Posted by: aeolidkitty Apr 16 2008, 11:02 PM|
| With a brief second
Of taps, she enters his life,
Swinging in so quick
And pausing only
To ask, to show, then dissolve
Before, in a blink
(Window shades flutter;
The air stills in the white room)
She somehow is gone--
|Posted by: Negima Apr 17 2008, 02:19 AM|
| In the hospital
Two friends, one's safe, the other
Heartbroken, no cure
|Posted by: mistersaxon Apr 17 2008, 02:39 AM|
| Breeze blows the curtains. . .
Poor sweet sick zombie 'zilla -
Seems he has to die
in its first blush is sweetness:
bad news might kill it
Tears flood down her cheeks
Yutaka! She needs a hug!
You should give her one.*
The moment is lost -
through the window like a breeze.
Has she left for good?
When his mum finds out
he's upset a magic girl
she'll ground him for weeks!
*No, not like that - they are only 15.
@aeolidkitty: Love your last stanza - very authentic if you know what I mean.
|Posted by: aeolidkitty Apr 18 2008, 06:29 PM|
My sentiments exactly
|Posted by: darrin Apr 19 2008, 02:20 PM|
| stuck here for so long
at last an autumn breeze comes
if only she knew
but the words stick in my throat
like stubborn leaves that won't fall
|Posted by: aeolidkitty Apr 21 2008, 10:10 PM|
Blurs in past panels,
Always drenched in the shadows
Just to see Yuki.
Cold day after day,
Never noticed, just trailing,
Till she fell for[on] me--