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Megatokyo Forums > SD Fanworks > [haiku] [1095] - I Fsck'd Up

Posted by: Captain Button Mar 6 2008, 01:13 PM
Absent betrayal
But zombies ate my 'zilla!
Do not mention the grrl

You speak but she does not hear
Welcome to the bad ending

Posted by: Brigid Mar 6 2008, 04:59 PM
apology call
gave girl far too much detail
ph34r to follow soon

Posted by: yolen Mar 6 2008, 09:25 PM
Two brought as tribute
To the pure-hearted goddess
How will she react?

Posted by: Brigid Mar 6 2008, 09:34 PM
Oh wow. That's a good one.

maiden nearest heart
struck dumb by crazy answer
cause for lost signal?

Posted by: yolen Mar 6 2008, 09:34 PM
Mutated zilla
Hurt and angry Erika
What else can go wrong?

You just had to ask
Kimiko fanboys unite!
Where are they going?

Yours are pretty good, too. laugh.gif

Posted by: Brigid Mar 6 2008, 10:04 PM
Thanks! happy.gif

forbidden phrase
brings more peril to heroes
trouble with chixors

Posted by: Malefactress Mar 7 2008, 12:33 AM
Killing time...

mystery magic
mother thief listens closely
dormant idol sighs

zombies and luv skillz
erika's favorite moron
is pretty damn fscked.

fanboys hoist them high
one of them being a sure
virgin sacrifice

( wink.gif )

amid the tumult
it lurks in darkness, waiting--
day of the cool thing!

too far away now
snarled within itchy-boo row
click and dial tone

if we can't have her
we might as well do our best
but damn, they're heavy.

perched piro ponders
that now, inexplicably,
he wants a muffin.

Posted by: Brigid Mar 7 2008, 12:36 PM
laugh.gif Oh! That last one is funny!

procession enters
eyes meet over otaku
connection failure

Posted by: darrin Mar 7 2008, 01:43 PM
"On top of the world;"
That's how she made me feel. Now?
I'd like to get down...

Posted by: Brigid Mar 8 2008, 11:25 AM
laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif

Okay, that's a winner. (Poor Piro.)

Posted by: aeolidkitty Mar 9 2008, 03:47 PM
(he perches atop
the cart of muffin-y doom,
unaware that near

lurks his nemesis;
pulling him closer, pulling
strings of spider web

until, close enough,
miho, black widow spider,
consumes this fly's soul.)

on largo.

Posted by: mistersaxon Mar 9 2008, 04:18 PM
He calls out to her
Laying bare his hopes and fears
Then - disconnection!

Heart in his mouth
He leaves many messages
But gets no answer.

Torn apart by fate
And circumstance most cruel
Will they be re-joined?

Then we realise
The very same thing happened
To crazy Largo.

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