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|Posted by: BinaryTears Aug 21 2007, 08:14 AM|
| Merciless teasing
Her strength must come from within.
Life is uncertain.
Some things are never proven.
Enough hints, Yuki?
A magical girl
must be able to escape
Oh for fuck's sake girl!
From stage left, zombies appear.
Get your arse in gear.
|Posted by: Architectonic Aug 24 2007, 04:03 AM|
| Nicely done, I liked that! Especially the last verse.
Now my turn:
Yuki finds herself
Responsible for the world
Her mother watching
Advice is given
But will it be understood,
Covert as it is?
|Posted by: Rudbeck Aug 24 2007, 03:09 PM|
| Very nice! Very subtle! I particularly liked your third verse, which inspired me to apply my rusty skills:
born from other's ideas.