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Posted by: BinaryTears Aug 21 2007, 08:14 AM
Merciless teasing
Her strength must come from within.
Awaiting resolve.

Life is uncertain.
Some things are never proven.
Enough hints, Yuki?

A magical girl
must be able to escape
role stereotypes.

Oh for fuck's sake girl!
From stage left, zombies appear.
Get your arse in gear.

Posted by: Architectonic Aug 24 2007, 04:03 AM
Nicely done, I liked that! Especially the last verse. happy.gif

Now my turn:

Yuki finds herself
Responsible for the world
Her mother watching

Advice is given
But will it be understood,
Covert as it is?

Posted by: Rudbeck Aug 24 2007, 03:09 PM
wub.gif Very nice! Very subtle! I particularly liked your third verse, which inspired me to apply my rusty skills:

Sterotypes are
born from other's ideas.
Discover yourself!


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